Snow White Suicide Girl Revamp

As I stated in my last post I was working on a redo on the project I had just started. Seems like this year will be a year of first because this is my first nude (pin up) and my first time drawing tattoos.  I just had this image and the first one was good but I knew I could take it further.    So here is the first one again. 

Here is the finished version of the second one.

I thought about changing the hair to fit the style, but it makes her look not so much like snow white so nix that, but it still looks good.

Here is just the lines.